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    2. [TEA-GEA] ESLDO, English as a Second Language, ESL Level 4 by Ms. C. Wang (2023-2024)
    3. Lesson 4.4 - Work Period-Writing & Revising -Your Short Story & Student -Teacher Conferences

    Lesson 4.4 - Work Period-Writing & Revising -Your Short Story & Student -Teacher Conferences

    • Lesson 4.4 - Work Period-Writing & Revising -Your Short Story & Student -Teacher Conferences

      Lesson 4.4 - Work Period-Writing & Revising -Your Short Story & Student -Teacher Conferences

      Learning Goals: By the end of this lesson you will be able to

      (1) Work independently during the assignment work period.

      (4) Utilize classmates and peers as resources for story building. 


      •  TODAY'S SCHEDULE Folder

        (8:00 pm - 9:30 pm)

        • Announcements: Assignment Due Date Reminders, Student/Teacher Conferencing
        • Icebreaker: Past and Present Tense - Kahoot
        • Bonus Activity: A Closer Look at Past and Present Tense
        • Work Period:
          • Last Day for Overdue Assignments
          • Lesson 4.2 "Forum: Story Building + Peer Feedback"
          • Lesson 4.1 "Analyzing a Story"
          • Lesson 4.3  "My Short Story - Rough Draft"-Teacher/Student Conferences

        (9:30 pm - 9:45 pm)

        • BREAK

        (9:45 pm - 11:15 pm)

        • Work Period
        • Wrap-Up Announcements:  Assignment Due Date Reminders, Weekend Homework, Student/Teacher Conferencing on Short Story writing (rough Drafts)
        • Exit Card


      •  Icebreaker: Past and Present Tense - Kahoot Folder
      •  Bonus Activity: A Closer Look at Past and Present Tense Forum


        For this activity I would like you to write:

        • 5 sentences related to your story using past tense
        • 5 sentences related to your story using present tense
        • 5 sentences related to your story using future tense

        You MUST also use at least one adjective in each sentence. 

      •  Assignment: Analyzing a Story (copy)

        For this assignment you are required to complete an analysis on a story of your choosing. 

        Here is the template you should be using for your analysis:


        You may look to your teacher's example for reference.


      •  Assignment: Short Story Writing Rough Draft - Part 2 (copy)
        Your short story assignment will be divided into sections. The first section of the assignment is creating a Rough Draft of your story. 

        A rough draft is a version of your story that is complete but not revised or edited. It is a good idea to begin the story writing process with a rough draft so you may organize your ideas. 

        PART ONE: Rough Draft
        You MUST refer to the template below as you begin to write & revise your rough draft. You MUST also write in paragraphs that are double-spaced & in your own words.  Length 500-1500 words= 2-4 pages double spaced.



      •  Lesson Exit Card Questionnaire

        Students to complete this after you've finished all activities/tasks in today's lesson.

      •  Lesson 4.4-Short Story Analysis & Teacher-Student Conferences File
      •  Exit Card 4-4 Sentence Writing Practice-Improving My Sentence Writing Assignment
      •  Create Your Own Short Story Instructions/Rubric File
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