Show, Don't Tell!
Instructions: Re-read your narrative draft. Find at least 5 sentences that can be improved by using " show" language. Use one of each of the following techniques to improve your work. Highlight the changes.
- Update the verb making them STRONG VERBS
- Replace explanations with dialogue
- Rewrite simple descriptions by using sensory details
- replace simple descriptions with literary devices ( simile, metaphor, personification)